Power: Lights Embrace

Power Name: Lights Embrace
Power Type: Elemental/Manipulation
Power Description: The ability to emit and manipulate surrounding light to perform offensive, supplemental, and even defensive capabilities.

Strengths: Has a varied arsenal which can be separated into two categories, soft light and hard light:

Soft light is the more supplemental which includes short term bursts of light that can hinder an enemies sight via manipulating the light around Raine to simple light production at night. To put more perspective, he can shroud his body in light which can cause the enemy not to fully realize where his strikes are coming from. With proper technique he can even blind enemies, but on his basic levels he just shines brightly enough to hinder their sight.

Hard light is the more offensive side of his power as it involves light constructs which can arm him when he is disarmed to LASERS!!!! To be more specific with the light constructs he can produce basically anything, however without a proper technique his basic power is limited to creating small creature of light, roughly the size of a small dog, which can roam within thirty meters from Raine or else they disparate back into regular light. When it comes to Light Construct weapons and armors, he can produce anything he can conceive, but without a proper technique they are rather weakened item as if they were made with refined-rank material. When it comes to items, as long as he can think them and concentrate on them, he can make it, ie he can make a chair and table but once his focus on them is gone, so are they. Lastly when it comes to lasers, well thanks to his inexperience the lasers he can shoot without techniques is more of a concussive shots which travel as fast as a shot arrow and can knock a person back a few feet but by no means is it fatal under normal circumstance.

Weaknesses: Raine is at his strongest during the day, however at night or whenever in a dark place he cannot produce hard light which lies most of his power's variety. Moonlight is an adequate source at night so if it is out he can produce very weak hard light but nothing compared to his power during the day. All light constructs are blunt in nature, so he may be able to produce a sword of light but it cannot cut, also cannot over use his light constructed weapons, he cannot create one construct right after another in succession, if he does, the weapon is a grade weaker with each consecutive construct, he needs to concentrate on a set of weapons at a time. Also he cannot attain higher speed, his power does not influence his physical attributes in anyway. Also weak to mirrors...

Fighting Style: Raine does not use his power frequently as he prides himself more in his physical attributes so he will tend to only use his power in dire situations orrrrrrr if he wants to show off. However when he truly uses his power he is a force to be reckoned with as he can produce additional weapons or shoot off volatile projectiles with high precision.

Hello Raine Gray! Today I will be grading your power, Light's Embrace! Any corrections you need are below:

Light's Embrace: Firstly, let's work with the soft light aspect of your power. Instead of invisibility, because that hardly makes sense to me, just use it to gather the light around you, making yourself too bright for enemies to clearly see your limb movements, so if you swing a fist or weapon at them, it will be very hard to clearly see where you are aiming. Now, when using it like this to coat your body, it only shines bright enough for your enemy not to see you clearly, and not to completely blind them. If you want to blind enemies, you will need to make a tech for that. That seems like all you plan to do with soft light with the addition of light production at night, which I assume is just making a bright light so you can see things more clearly, so unless you add anything else to it, on to hard light!

Now, this is where I make hard restrictions, because as it stands, you left it very vague, and if left as is, this power will be game breaking. Let's start by saying that as far as creation goes, you won't be able to treat it as making combat allies like soldiers or deadly animals out of light UNLESS you make a tech for it, so until then, you are stuck to making small animals that can only be used as support, i.e summoning a puppy made out of light to distract the enemy, but you can't summon dozens of these small animals, because that would work too much in your favor. Yes, you can make objects like a couch, tables, obstacles that can help you, etc. Just make sure they aren't over-the-top. Also, you need a range in which your creations won't be able to function and will dissipate away from you. I would say about 30 meters, since you are experienced rank.

Of course, though I restricted you in terms of making allies, I will allow you to make weapons in any form, though you won't be able to levitate them without a tech. Also, because making these weapons aren't a tech, you must treat each like  a refine-ranked weapon, and even then, you cannot overuse it, so I don't want to see you switching weapons every few seconds ic. Know when to put it on pause, especially since light as a power is on the restricted list.

The next thing I would expect you to want to make are defenses, like shields or armor. Treat them like light-made weapons, refine-ranked, and don't overuse. Anything more must be a tech.

The final thing is the whole lasers business. Until you get a tech for it, I won't allow them any piercing power, but instead small explosions occur on impact. If one directly hit a target, it would throw them back a few yards and they would definitely have troubles getting back up. They don't move at the speed of light since that is banned, but instead move at the speed of an arrow when shot out of a bow. Like I said in the beginning, if you want lasers actually capable of causing severe fatal injuries and moving faster than an arrow, make a tech for it.

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Power

Power Name: Lights Embrace
Power Type: Elemental/Manipulation
Power Description: The ability to emit and manipulate surrounding light to perform offensive, supplemental, and even defensive capabilities.

Strengths: Has a varied arsenal which can be separated into two categories, soft light and hard light:

Soft light is the more supplemental which includes short term bursts of light that can hinder an enemies sight via manipulating the light around Raine to simple light production at night. To put more perspective, he can shroud his body in light which can cause the enemy not to fully realize where his strikes are coming from. With proper technique he can even blind enemies, but on his basic levels he just shines brightly enough to hinder their sight.

Hard light is the more offensive side of his power as it involves light constructs which can arm him when he is disarmed to LASERS!!!! To be more specific with the light constructs he can produce basically anything, however without a proper technique his basic power is limited to creating small creature of light, roughly the size of a small dog, which can roam within thirty meters from Raine or else they disparate back into regular light. When it comes to Light Construct weapons and armors, he can produce anything he can conceive, but without a proper technique they are rather weakened item as if they were made with refined-rank material. When it comes to items, as long as he can think them and concentrate on them, he can make it, ie he can make a chair and table but once his focus on them is gone, so are they. Lastly when it comes to lasers, well thanks to his inexperience the lasers he can shoot without techniques is more of a concussive shots which travel as fast as a shot arrow and can knock a person back a few feet but by no means is it fatal under normal circumstance.

Weaknesses: Raine is at his strongest during the day, however at night or whenever in a dark place he cannot produce hard light which lies most of his power's variety. Moonlight is an adequate source at night so if it is out he can produce very weak hard light but nothing compared to his power during the day. All light constructs are blunt in nature, so he may be able to produce a sword of light but it cannot cut, also cannot over use his light constructed weapons, he cannot create one construct right after another in succession, if he does, the weapon is a grade weaker with each consecutive construct, he needs to concentrate on a set of weapons at a time. Also he cannot attain higher speed, his power does not influence his physical attributes in anyway. Also weak to mirrors...

Fighting Style: Raine does not use his power frequently as he prides himself more in his physical attributes so he will tend to only use his power in dire situations orrrrrrr if he wants to show off. However when he truly uses his power he is a force to be reckoned with as he can produce additional weapons or shoot off volatile projectiles with high precision.