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    FieryNyan

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    Re: Sasakure's Boom App

    Post by FieryNyan on Wed Jan 07, 2015 2:25 pm

    Hello, I'm FieryNyan, and I'll be checking your app today!

    Overall, your power seems fine, so it's ok to me! Well, maybe something to add to your weakness is that after an explosion, the battlefield will be full of dust and smoke, therefore leading to a temporary vision impairment?

    As for the spell, when you mention that its range is a 12 meter radius, that means it explodes on the point of collision right? You do know it means that you're inside the radius of explosion, ay ._.
    Can you also elaborate how strong the explosion is? Like what type of force is released, or what damage it will deal to an average person?

    Also, You may create other techniques that allow your blasts to fly, or even launch multiple explosions.


    EDIT : Can you include in your weakness that you cannot use your attacks as surprise attacks?
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    Re: Sasakure's Boom App

    Post by Sasakure on Thu Jan 08, 2015 12:12 am

    Before I just start editing, is there a set amount of techniques I can make?

    EDIT: Ah, since I can only buy one at a time, I will just have this one technique for now


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    Re: Sasakure's Boom App

    Post by Sasakure on Thu Jan 08, 2015 12:41 am

    Sorry for the double post, but ayy fixed


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    Re: Sasakure's Boom App

    Post by FieryNyan on Thu Jan 08, 2015 9:19 am

    Is your power a blast type flame, or just a huge knockback force?

    And when executed, wouldn't you be pushed back also, due to Newton's law( the 3rd law I think)
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    Re: Sasakure's Boom App

    Post by Sasakure on Fri Jan 09, 2015 12:55 am

    Fixed, hopefully.


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    Re: Sasakure's Boom App

    Post by FieryNyan on Fri Jan 09, 2015 10:04 am

    1. Strengths: One of the great perks of having this power is that she is able to blast away enemies or damage them when they come into close contact with her. Those who lack armor deal much more damage due to the fact that they are exposed.

    Just elaborate on how strong this knockback is, as it is going to be something you can spam lol.


    Other than that, it seems fine Smile
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    Re: Sasakure's Boom App

    Post by Sasakure on Sat Jan 10, 2015 12:52 am

    Fixed again
    //sobbu


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    Re: Sasakure's Boom App

    Post by FieryNyan on Sat Jan 10, 2015 6:12 am

    Power Description: Boom, enables its wielder to generate powerful explosions, whose sizes can be controlled and manipulated. Sasakure channels her ability through her legs/leg weapons. With a single kick, she can produce flares from the tip of her weapon, which explode when contact is made. The blast radius or distance the enemy is pushed back is dependent on the technique that is used or how strong she desires the explosions to be(The weakest radius being 8 meters and the strongest still unknown since it hasn't reached its full potential, however currently it is at 30 meters)


    Strengths: One of the great perks of having this power is that she is able to blast away enemies or damage them when they come into close contact with her. Those who lack armor deal much more damage due to the fact that they are exposed. The knockback is dependent on the techniques she uses, and since her power hasn't been unlocked fully, her weakest knockback is 12 meters and from there it may rise.


    These two contradict each other.

    On the description, you say her weakest is 8 meters, but in the strength you state that it is 12 ._.


    Fix that, and you'll be approved Smile
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    Sasakure's Boom App

    Post by Sasakure on Sat Jan 10, 2015 6:25 am

    screaming bcuz plZ

    don3


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