Power: Ice

Power Name: Ice
Power Type: Manipulation/Creation
Power Description: Ice is a power that allows for the creation and manipulation of ice. The user's body temperature drops when the power is activated and ice crystals form around them. Seri can either use his weapon or his hands to create the ice. When using his weapon, the ice is formed at the tip and can be aimed or moved. When using his bare hands, he can only aim it.

Strengths: Like most things, when they are near ice for a certain period of time, they end up freezing. The ice that is created by Seri can freeze the target in one touch if exposed to bare skin(besides his own). When being frozen in the ice, the body temperature drops slowly. As soon as it reaches its lowest(which is unknown to by Seri, some say -35), the target who is in the ice is killed. The ice can be removed at anytime if Seri chooses so or he loses focus.
Weaknesses:Like all ice, it can be melted by water. This power greatest weakness is fire. When it is sent to enemy who sends back fire, the ice melts immediately and turns into water. If the power is activated and Seri is attacked by a user of fire, no ice would form when it is needed. It takes several hours(4 post) to regain the ability to use the ice once again.

Fighting Style: When using this power, Seri usually uses his weapon to send a projectile of ice. He only uses his power when he is in a very dangerous situation or he use angry. When he is not angry, he uses his power carefully and tends to use it as a distraction so that he can attack using nothing but his strength. He also uses it as a shield to protect him when he is either weak or helping others(rarely).


Name: Killer Shards
Type: Offensive
Rank: Experience
Description: After performing a hand sign, numerous jagged ice shards form around the user. The ice shards are sent flying 20 feet away from the user towards the target. Once it reaches the target, it pierces their body and can leave fatal wounds depending on the rank of the target. The user also has the ability to redirect the ice shards.

Duration: 2 Post
Cooldown: 4 Post

Name: Omega Glacier
Type: Offensive
Rank: Experience
Description: After performing a hand sign, the user puts a hand out and aims their hand at the target. Next, a large glacier is formed and is sent 25 feet towards the target. Once it hits the intended target, it can merge their body with its own or simply exploded causing many shards to pierce their body.

Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 3 Post

Name: Cavern of the Yeti
Type: Defensive
Rank: Apprentice
Description: After performing a hand sign, an ice like barrier that is see through forms around the user. It protects the user from any attack on the outside and can cover a radius of 20 ft. The ice barrier can be broken by someone stronger than the user.

Duration: 3 Post
Cooldown: 5 Post

Bumpy Bumpy

Hello Seri! Today I will be grading your power, Ice! Any corrections you need are below:

Ice: Alright, so first I want to deal with creating items and weapons from your ice, since your power allows you to do that if I read correctly. Let's start by saying that as far as creation goes, you won't be able to treat it as making combat allies like soldiers or deadly animals out of ice UNLESS you make a tech for it, so until then, you are stuck to making small animals that can only be used as support, i.e summoning a puppy made out of ice to distract the enemy, but you can't summon dozens of these small animals, because that would work too much in your favor. Just to be certain, as I haven't in the past with others, you must focus on whatever you make as well, so once you begin focusing more on other things, your creations will dissipate. Also, nothing you create can go 30 meters away from you, or else they melt.

Now, onto creating items and weapons. I will allow you to create objects like chairs, tables, benches, any other furniture, as well as obsticals that could help you fight your enemies, as long as you don't go over-the-top with it.

Now for creating weapons. Because making these weapons aren't a tech, you must treat each like  a refine-ranked weapon, and even then, you cannot overuse it, so I don't want to see you switching weapons every few seconds ic. Know when to put it on pause, especially since light as a power is in the restricted list.

The next thing I would expect you to want to make are defenses, like shields or armor. Treat them like ice-made weapons, refine-ranked, and don't overuse. Anything more must be a tech.

Also, keep in mind the genral weaknesses of ice, like fire, because they will be able to easily destroy your creations wthout much effort. Another note about ice creation is that none of your creations will be able to float unless you have a tech for it.

From your fighting style, it says that you use your weapon to send projectiles of ice. You can do that as well, but clarify that, like what, do you swing it and knife-size crystals made of ice come out, or do you aim your sword at the opponent and fire? Give me more info and then I can grade this portion.

Not sure if you were actually talking about making items and weapons out of ice, but you can keep that in your power if you want to anyway. Now, onto the freezing ability of your powers. First of all, I won't let you freeze anyone with one touch. If you want to freeze people, you will need a tech for that, but I can allow you to drop a person's body temperature with a touch. No fatal drops, but they would feel as if they were naked in the middle a very cold night, however their body temperature would slowly start to go back to normal after a few minutes of suffering like that ic. Sorry I have to limit it like that, but abilities are supposed to be basic unless you have techs. At least I let you create stuff right?

Killer Shards: I will allow you to increase the range to 30 meters. Approved otherwise.

Omega Glacier: When you say infused, I believe that leaving the opponent frozen into the glacier, correct? Well, for this one, put that if that does occur, they are only frozen for one post. Also, put that it can be broken by experienced or higher ranked techs, or a multiple amount of weaker ranked techs. Also it can be broken by a multiple amount of regular attacks, like hits, kicks or weapon attacks, as long as the assaulter is experienced-ranked or higher and has level 2 strength or higher. Level 3 strength or higher if the assaulter is an apprentice.

Cavern of the Yeti: Like the glacier, but with less defense due to it's technique tier, this barrier can also be destroyed by a tech apprentice higher, or multiple techs of weaker ranks. Also it can be broken by a multiple amount of regular attacks, like hits, kicks or weapon attacks as long as the assaulter is apprentice-ranked or higher and has level 2 strength or higher. Level 3 strength or higher if the assaulter is a novice.

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