Brit, what Weakness should I get? Since this ability is limited.
2 posters
Nyan's Power Application posts
FieryNyan- Name : Ares
Rank : 1-5
Title : Legend
EXP : 34586
Posts : 92
Age : 26
- Post n°1
Re: Nyan's Power Application posts
FieryNyan- Name : Ares
Rank : 1-5
Title : Legend
EXP : 34586
Posts : 92
Age : 26
- Post n°2
Re: Nyan's Power Application posts
Done!
Britannia- Admin
- Name : Great Britain
Rank : Country
Title : Island
EXP : 37074
Posts : 163
- Post n°3
Re: Nyan's Power Application posts
You need to add more detail to the weaknesses. How much focus is required? Must he stand still? Can he still move?
We discussed this. He can move, but it requires focus, no high-accuracy actions. Add that.
Also, state that he needs to be aware of the object he wants to snatch. He can't just snatch something he doesn't know about.
Expand on your Fighting Style. I want to know when, how and to what extent he uses the ability. Does he aid himself in combat? Does he focus and use its strengths to their highest ability? Does he use it out of the blue, impulsive? Or does he position himself before using the power? Just... write some more xD
Physical Hunt needs to have "Once the duration is over the user ends up extremely tired and weak, leaving him to susceptible attack. He will have used all his power after Physical Hunt is over." Add that while doing Physical Hunt, you can't use other Powers/Magic/Enchantment. You can heighten the duration to 10 posts. (granted that you are aware that the 5 posts of sapping the opponent's powers count to the duration). You may also add that Physical Hunt can not be negated or impeded by normal means such as magical barriers or debuffs. Lastly, state that the cooldown is also a resting period in which the user needs to be completely resting to rejuvenate and refill his stamina and power.
For Fox Hunt, you gotta be MUCH more specific. Copying a sentence from the wiki ain't enough mister staff-member >.>
Fox Hunt should have a shorter range as it is a short burst of Snatch powers. You should state that people of your own Rank (not Tier) can still follow Fox Hunt and act against it if you just use it directly against them. You won't be stealing teeth from someone as strong as yourself.
We discussed this. He can move, but it requires focus, no high-accuracy actions. Add that.
Also, state that he needs to be aware of the object he wants to snatch. He can't just snatch something he doesn't know about.
Expand on your Fighting Style. I want to know when, how and to what extent he uses the ability. Does he aid himself in combat? Does he focus and use its strengths to their highest ability? Does he use it out of the blue, impulsive? Or does he position himself before using the power? Just... write some more xD
Physical Hunt needs to have "Once the duration is over the user ends up extremely tired and weak, leaving him to susceptible attack. He will have used all his power after Physical Hunt is over." Add that while doing Physical Hunt, you can't use other Powers/Magic/Enchantment. You can heighten the duration to 10 posts. (granted that you are aware that the 5 posts of sapping the opponent's powers count to the duration). You may also add that Physical Hunt can not be negated or impeded by normal means such as magical barriers or debuffs. Lastly, state that the cooldown is also a resting period in which the user needs to be completely resting to rejuvenate and refill his stamina and power.
For Fox Hunt, you gotta be MUCH more specific. Copying a sentence from the wiki ain't enough mister staff-member >.>
Fox Hunt should have a shorter range as it is a short burst of Snatch powers. You should state that people of your own Rank (not Tier) can still follow Fox Hunt and act against it if you just use it directly against them. You won't be stealing teeth from someone as strong as yourself.
FieryNyan- Name : Ares
Rank : 1-5
Title : Legend
EXP : 34586
Posts : 92
Age : 26
- Post n°4
Nyan's Power Application posts
Phew, done!
|
|
Thu Mar 10, 2016 8:56 pm by Britannia
» Once Upon a Nightmare (JCK) -- Fairy Tale Horror (1 Year!)
Sat Sep 05, 2015 10:46 am by Guest
» Another Warrior RP
Sun Aug 23, 2015 7:11 am by Guest
» Libertas Valediction
Wed Jul 22, 2015 6:43 am by Guest
» Ramora Weyr
Thu Jun 11, 2015 4:03 am by Guest
» Bleach-Story
Mon May 25, 2015 7:41 am by Guest
» 間案 TIME TABLES, animanga post-apocalyptic
Thu May 21, 2015 3:15 am by Guest
» Lochland Grove[jcink]
Fri May 01, 2015 1:40 am by Guest
» THE WILD
Tue Apr 28, 2015 5:07 am by Guest